Friday, June 1, 2018

ALL ABOUT ME!!!!!!!!

Here is a link to my original work Link. I am proud of this because I got it done on time and at a good quality, I worked hard with the polylines though it was hard.  I am also proud because it was one of the people that showed others how to do it.
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 12:03 PM

    I think that your first blog is really good and has heaps of detail. For me personally though, i think that there might be to much detail. I wouldn't tell anyone my teachers or if I live on a farm. But it is your post and it is real creative.

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  2. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 12:14 PM

    Hi Amy, I really love what you have done. Your hair is super good. You have made a descriptive explanation about yourself.

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  3. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 12:26 PM

    Hi Amy, I really love your post. Your explanation about yourself really tells me a lot more about you. I especially love the angle of your head. How long this take you?

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  4. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 12:27 PM

    I really like this as you didn't do what everyone else did and you thought outside of the box,the way you did your hair is awesome i can tell you put effort into your work. I really like your description to i think i got to know you a bit better from your explanation

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  5. AnonymousJune 18, 2018 at 10:24 AM

    Great description and picture Amy! The way you did your hair was amazing and it looks very cool and creative. Your description tells a lot about you and now I know more about you. Can’t wait to see more of your learning throughout the year!

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