Thursday, June 21, 2018

Free Write

This was a hard piece to write because I couldn't think about Bo without tears. I am proud and I think Bo would be too. I like how I added detail to my writing.
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2018 at 11:19 AM

    Hi Amy,
    I'm Georgia from makaraka school you might know me from cricket,
    your piece of writing here is amazing. I love it even though it's a sad story. You might need to proof read it because I saw some lowercase letters after a full stop.

    From Georgia, Makaraka school

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what we had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.

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